高三寫(xiě)作專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練（一）——邀請(qǐng)信

【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】

邀請(qǐng)信的文體結(jié)構(gòu)，寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng)及實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

【高考考向】

高考書(shū)面表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)考察文體是書(shū)信。經(jīng)?？嫉念}型有邀請(qǐng)信、建議信、口頭通知、申請(qǐng)信、投訴信和道歉信。學(xué)生已初步學(xué)習(xí)邀請(qǐng)信的寫(xiě)法，再做進(jìn)一步講解，讓學(xué)生能緊扣要點(diǎn)，合理得體地完成邀請(qǐng)信內(nèi)容的表達(dá)。

【高考真題】

（2017年課標(biāo)全國(guó)Ⅱ）

假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教Henry 一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙(paper-cutting) 藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.展覽時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)；   2.展覽內(nèi)容。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考范文：

Dear Henry，

    I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition, which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．

As is well-known to us all, Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it, so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit. The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China. During the activity, I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．

      Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me? I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．

邀請(qǐng)信

邀請(qǐng)信的三部分:  Beginning ：state your purpose說(shuō)明事由，發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)

Body ：give detailed descriptions介紹活動(dòng)，陳述理由

Ending : express your expectation 作總結(jié)，期待回復(fù)或參與

Part 1 :  說(shuō)明事由，發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)

1. 說(shuō)明事由

the graduation ceremony   the opening ceremony

a talk show       a drawing exhibition

an English speech contest   a farewell party

a wedding ceremony    arts festival

the school’s 50th anniversary

2. 發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)

選詞填空：greatest    inclined    extend   privileged    available  

A New Year’s party is coming……

1) It is a great honor for me to invite you to attend the party.

2) It is my pleasure to extend an invitation to you to join us on behalf of my class.

3) I am wondering whether you are available and able to share the important moment with us.

4) It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to participate in the party.

5) I would like / am inclined to invite you to take part in the party.

6) I feel honored /privileged /obliged to invite you to join in the party.

Part 2 :  介紹活動(dòng)，陳述理由

1. 介紹活動(dòng)（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容、意義）

The school’s 100th anniversary is coming……

1) 活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)

   A grand anniversary is to be held  in celebration of（為了慶祝）its 100th birthday of our high school. As scheduled（計(jì)劃；安排）, the celebration is due（預(yù)計(jì)發(fā)生于） from October 1st to 3rd, when / during which time our old classmates and schoolmates will get together and pay a visit to our school.

2) 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容

To ensure a satisfying celebration, many activities are in store for us to get involved in（參與）. During the daytime, a representative, on behalf of  / representing（代表） all schoolmates present, will deliver a speech showing our deepest appreciation to（表達(dá)我們最誠(chéng)摯的感激）our school and teachers. When the night falls, a party is to be held. Not only can we dance and sing _to the fullest_（盡情地，充分地）, but we can also share happiness and sorrow with friends.

3) 活動(dòng)意義

  100 years _has witnessed/seen_（見(jiàn)證了） many great changes in our school. It is high time that we should pay a visit back and share such a meaningful moment with our old friends.

  The purpose of the activity is to ...  舉辦活動(dòng)的目的是...

4) 活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)

   A grand anniversary is to be held in celebration of（為了慶祝）its 100th birthday of our high school. As scheduled（計(jì)劃；安排）, the celebration is due（預(yù)計(jì)發(fā)生于） from October 1st to 3rd, when / during which time our old classmates and schoolmates will get together and pay a visit to our school.

5) 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容

To ensure a satisfying celebration, many activities are in store for us to get involved in_（參與）. During the daytime, a representative, on behalf of  / representing（代表） all schoolmates present, will deliver a speech showing our deepest appreciation to（表達(dá)我們最誠(chéng)摯的感激）our school and teachers. When the night falls, a party is to be held. Not only can we dance and sing to the fullest（盡情地，充分地）, but we can also share happiness and sorrow with friends.

6) 活動(dòng)意義

  100 years has witnessed/seen（見(jiàn)證了） many great changes in our school. It is high time that we should pay a visit back and share such a meaningful moment with our old friends.

  The purpose of the activity is to ...  舉辦活動(dòng)的目的是...

2. 陳述理由

理由一：用下列詞匯表達(dá)“你非常喜歡（熱衷于）中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化”。

eg.  You are extremely interested in...

desire         You have a burning desire for ……

desire    You have an overwhelmingly strong desire for ……

passion   You have a strong /burning passion for ……

love    You develop a profound love for……

enthusiastic  You are exceedingly enthusiastic about……

fascinated   You are fully fascinated by……

keen    You are surprisingly keen on ……

fond    You are passionately fond of……

hungry /thirsty  You are incredibly hungry / thirsty for ……

理由二: You have a sharp eye / ear / nose for ……

Part 3 :  作總結(jié)，期待回復(fù)或參與

1.  作總結(jié)

用A-N提示詞匯完成下列句子，每個(gè)句子可以有多個(gè)選擇。

1) Undoubtedly, you will have a(n)   C D E F   time there.

2) It will surely leave a(n)   H  I   impression on you.

3) Your participation will make the activity ___K  M____.

4) Hopefully, you will have a(n)   L    understanding of …

5) I'm sure we will spend a(n)   C D E F   evening together.

A. good    B. wonderful  C. fabulous  D. enjoyable  E. unforgettable

F. joyful  G. Excellent  H. deep   I. everlasting  J. interesting

K. entertaining  L. profound  M. meaningful  N. merry

2.  期待回復(fù)或參與

How to express your expectation and gratitude?

1) I would be grateful / thankful / appreciative if you could accept my invitation.

2) It would be highly appreciated if you could come.

3) We are sincerely looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.

4) Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.

5) If you can participate in the visit, we will be more than glad.

6) You are earnestly/surely expected to be present if it is convenient.

7) Hopefully, you won’t decline my invitation if you are available, will you?

8) Could you spare some time from your busy schedule to share the special moment with us?

9) Please let us know as soon as possible if you can come and tell us when you can make the trip.

【學(xué)生學(xué)情分析】

學(xué)生在近期的寫(xiě)作中暴露的主要問(wèn)題是學(xué)生在經(jīng)歷暑假之后，對(duì)基本書(shū)信格式等基本要求有所遺忘，邀請(qǐng)信內(nèi)容表達(dá)句式欠缺，經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)關(guān)鍵詞單一、甚至誤用的情況。

【建議變式練習(xí)】

你們班同學(xué)打算周六去爬香山。請(qǐng)給外教Chris寫(xiě)一封英文信，邀請(qǐng)他參加此次活動(dòng)。具體內(nèi)容如下：

1. 時(shí)間：8am—5 pm；      2. 集合地點(diǎn)：校門(mén)口；

3. 交通工具：公交車(chē)；      4. 攜帶物品：雨具，午餐，相機(jī)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于100；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【參考范文】

Dear Chris，      

    I’m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class. 

    We are supposed to gather at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am. The bus will serve as our transportation. We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch. At about 2:00 pm. we will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about 5.00pm. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain. Please spare some time to join us. 

Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.

Yours,

Joe

撰文：韓艷平

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審核：丁勁松

上傳：楊佳順